A) Darcy had thoroughly enjoyed good food.B) The good food that she need for the baby to get healthy.
A. Not the topic.B. Not a sentence!
A) No more appetite.B) Darcy had had changed after she got pregnant.
A. What about the pregnancy?B. Had changed WHAT?
topic: taste and pregnancymain idea: the pregnancy impacts to the women's taste.
close, but this is about a specific woman, not all women.
Topic: Effect of pregnancyMain idea: Woman's taste is effected when she is pregnant.
too generalThe effect on one woman's appetite during pregnancyThis woman's appetite was affected when she became pregnant.
(A) : The difficulty of tasting food when we are pregnant(B) :The appetite's problem that Darcy had to face when she was pregnant
Darcy had to face a difficult appetite problem when she became pregnant.
(A) Pregnancy problem(B) Women do not know what they want and what is good when they are pregnant.
A. not specific enoughB. NONONONONONONONONONONONOONONONONONONONO
A : for most of her life, Darcy had thoroughly enjoyed good food.B : pregnancy affected Darcy's joy of cooking
A. Causes of pregnantB. There are some changes of eating habits to women who get pregnant
A. I think we all know what the cause of pregnancy is. If not, please see me immediately.
Topic: Darcy's appetite disappeared after she was pregnantIdea: she didn't find anything made her hungry while shopping
topic is the main idea here.that explains the main idea.
Topic: the way that nutritious food is important for Darcy .Main idea: by the end she lost her appetite and unable to find a single food that appealed to her.
(A) Nutrition of pregnant women(B) Needs of nutrition and appetite are different for a pregnant woman
Rectification :(A) Appetite of pregnant women (especially Darcy)(B) Needs of nutrition are different for a pregnant woman (especially Darcy)
Topic: Pregnant woman's appetiteMain Idea: After learning she was pregnant, her appetite for food has completely changed.
Topic: Effect of pregnancy to the woman's appetiteMain idea: the woman's appetite becomes worse when she is pregnant.
a:find nutrition from delicious foods.b: Darcy's appetite changed because of her pregnantcy
Topic : pregnancy and appetitemain : her appetite seemed to disappear.
topic: Darcy's appetitemain idea: Darcy's appetite has change since she became pregnant
Topic: Disappearing appetiteMain Idea: The appetite change during the prenancy
topic: Darcy's appetitemain idea: she had difficulty in choosing nutrion food for growing baby when she was prenant
A. the change of a pregnant woman's appetiteB. The woman's appetite have changed after she pregnant.
topic: Pregnant affect tastemain idea: people might change their appetite if they get pregnant
a: the effect of veganismb: some people believe that young children can get benefits from veganism, others are not.
A) Darcy had thoroughly enjoyed good food.
ReplyDeleteB) The good food that she need for the baby to get healthy.
A. Not the topic.
DeleteB. Not a sentence!
A) No more appetite.
ReplyDeleteB) Darcy had had changed after she got pregnant.
A. What about the pregnancy?
DeleteB. Had changed WHAT?
topic: taste and pregnancy
ReplyDeletemain idea: the pregnancy impacts to the women's taste.
close, but this is about a specific woman, not all women.
DeleteTopic: Effect of pregnancy
ReplyDeleteMain idea: Woman's taste is effected when she is pregnant.
too general
DeleteThe effect on one woman's appetite during pregnancy
This woman's appetite was affected when she became pregnant.
(A) : The difficulty of tasting food when we are pregnant
ReplyDelete(B) :The appetite's problem that Darcy had to face when she was pregnant
Darcy had to face a difficult appetite problem when she became pregnant.
Delete(A) Pregnancy problem
ReplyDelete(B) Women do not know what they want and what is good when they are pregnant.
A. not specific enough
DeleteB. NONONONONONONONONONONONOONONONONONONONO
A : for most of her life, Darcy had thoroughly enjoyed good food.
ReplyDeleteB : pregnancy affected Darcy's joy of cooking
A. Causes of pregnant
ReplyDeleteB. There are some changes of eating habits to women who get pregnant
A. I think we all know what the cause of pregnancy is. If not, please see me immediately.
DeleteTopic: Darcy's appetite disappeared after she was pregnant
ReplyDeleteIdea: she didn't find anything made her hungry while shopping
topic is the main idea here.
Deletethat explains the main idea.
Topic: the way that nutritious food is important for Darcy .
ReplyDeleteMain idea: by the end she lost her appetite and unable to find a single food that appealed to her.
(A) Nutrition of pregnant women
ReplyDelete(B) Needs of nutrition and appetite are different for a pregnant woman
Rectification :
Delete(A) Appetite of pregnant women (especially Darcy)
(B) Needs of nutrition are different for a pregnant woman (especially Darcy)
Topic: Pregnant woman's appetite
ReplyDeleteMain Idea: After learning she was pregnant, her appetite for food has completely changed.
Topic: Effect of pregnancy to the woman's appetite
ReplyDeleteMain idea: the woman's appetite becomes worse when she is pregnant.
a:find nutrition from delicious foods.
ReplyDeleteb: Darcy's appetite changed because of her pregnantcy
Topic : pregnancy and appetite
ReplyDeletemain : her appetite seemed to disappear.
topic: Darcy's appetite
ReplyDeletemain idea: Darcy's appetite has change since she became pregnant
Topic: Disappearing appetite
ReplyDeleteMain Idea: The appetite change during the prenancy
topic: Darcy's appetite
ReplyDeletemain idea: she had difficulty in choosing nutrion food for growing baby when she was prenant
A. the change of a pregnant woman's appetite
ReplyDeleteB. The woman's appetite have changed after she pregnant.
topic: Pregnant affect taste
ReplyDeletemain idea: people might change their appetite if they get pregnant
a: the effect of veganism
ReplyDeleteb: some people believe that young children can get benefits from veganism, others are not.